Dirty Knife
a dirty knife
shoved
into my heart…
°
;
infecting me
with words
that rip me apart…
°
;
accusations
of things
i never did…
°
;
the words of yours
i pray
from me be rid…
°
;
©
~Sweetness~

a dirty knife
shoved
into my heart…
°
;
infecting me
with words
that rip me apart…
°
;
accusations
of things
i never did…
°
;
the words of yours
i pray
from me be rid…
°
;
©
~Sweetness~
love it a lot. I can see you take your time to practice such beautiful writing. I hope you keep going on with this writing of yours. Maybe write a book full of poems. Dont call it a job. Call it a hobby. Keep up the good work. People who write so beautifully, and the such gracious world, is the reason I take my time to write.
Thank you Fantasy…I’m one of those writers who write from real emotion, so it is either what I am experiencing at the time or something from memory…just get in touch with your emotions and you’ll be fine!
please, could you see and give me advice on my writing as well? please comment as well.
I would love to, but…I don’t know how…where is your writing?
look up:
kcaull.wordpress.com
if you can’t comment on the blog that’s alright, here is good.
Ok…your little link doesn’t work
type it in the search bar.
I will thanks…heading off to bed now…EST…but, will put your link in my blogroll if you don’t mind
sure ^.^ wont hurt anybody
good…that way I won’t lose it…friggin fibro…anyway I’ve started the butterfly story…and Happy New Year!